On A Raunchy P! Part II

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Good day sweets. I hope you are doing just fine. It is a wet morning here in Lagos, please read with caution. lol. This is the concluding part of last week’s story. If you missed it, you can read it here
. Enjoy
car sex The car was properly parked on Eric Moore road in a Conoil fuel station off the road before I could say Jack Robinson. I smiled and suddenly felt very powerful. Oto slowly removed his seat belt and turned to face me with his very sexy eyes and mouth calling, no, screaming unsaid words. We both burst into laughter at the same time and he asked if I was sure I knew what I was doing. I replied in the affirmative and he asked me what I wanted to do to him. At that point, all the scenes I read in fifty shades of grey and every other erotica started fighting for recognition in my head. I simply smiled and kissed him. A proper kiss this time; words cannot explain how mind-blowing it was. I knew then that I was in real trouble.

I had never had casual sex before and my first time was going to lead me into heart break. I almost started crying because I knew that once I ‘pop’d’ I wont be able to stop. My good inner man was trying all ‘she’ could to dissuade me but there was no going back on this. I just had to finish what I had started. I promised myself that it would only happen once but as soon as his hands slid under my gown I knew that I was deceiving myself. I had never felt anything that intense before and yes, I had been with skilful men; at least I thought they were skilful. I immediately started remembering all the chats we had in the past when he told me all the things he wanted to do to me. I got wetter with just those thoughts.

I started wondering if I was up to this task that I had put myself. I smiled shyly and looked at him. He licked his lips slowly and that was my breaking point. I immediately took off his belt, unzipped his trouser and put my head down all at once. I couldn’t afford to disappoint so I made sure that my efforts and his were worth it. His appreciative moans were more than enough to make me go on and on. Just when I thought I could no longer go on, he fell his chair and made me straddle him. My heart started beating three times faster; it was finally going to happen!!! I cannot explain the things he did to me because I am sure they were not normal.

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We left our spot about two hours later and drove to his house in silence. I was feeling so self-conscious at that moment that I almost burst into tears. I wasn’t sure if I made him feel half as good as he made me feel. I tried to sneak peeks at him but he was concentrating on the empty road more than I knew he should. I decided to ask him if it was that bad. He looked at me, winked and said, “You are finished today o. You think you have moves abi? I will teach that spring waist of yours a lesson”. I almost burst into tears of joy. My heart did an immediate somersault, my clitoris started vibrating and my teeth did not agree to close again. I kept replaying his words in my head and wondering what more he had in stock. I honestly thought after what happened earlier, we were going to get to the house and fall asleep immediately. My ‘learnership’ was very sure, alas.

I was already yawning by the time we got to his house, the fifteen minutes drive suddenly felt like two hours because of my anticipation. Oto parked his car and came out of the car without bothering to wear his shorts properly. I blushed when I noticed the gateman staring at us. I was totally glad that my dress was conservative even though I knew my hair was a dead give away.

As soon as I entered the house, I was flat against the door in seconds. The first thing I felt after I recovered from the shock was Oto’s mouth trailing kisses and nibbling on my neck. My body was totally on fire! All thoughts of sleep had been long-buried at this point. I felt Oto’s bulge from my gown and I smiled. I love it when I turn a guy on! Oh, the power!!! Oto lifted me up and carried me up the stairs without removing his lips from my body. I thought I would convulse, I just kept thrashing around! I never believed that I could orgasm while on the move. In fact, after our previous romp, I thought my mammary parts had packed up for the night. The stupid thing was seriously embarrassing me at the moment.

After Oto had achieved what he set to, he gently laid me on the bed and said, “one”….. I knew then that I was in trouble. My brain quickly reminded me that it was a Friday night and so there was nothing to fret about. I watched Oto stroll to turn on his sound system and come back to me with what I could only describe as hunger in his eyes. He leaned in and raised the hem of my gown with slow precision and the tip of his fingers trailing along. He finally took the gown off and at that moment, my stupid phone began to ring. images (18)

I tried to ignore it but it won the battle and I woke up from my slumber to see “Oto bobo” calling. I had slept off while waiting for him! I almost cried. I immediately remembered that Oto had never been to my flat before, I always made sure that he dropped me at the gate of the estate so that he won’t decide to surprise me someday. I picked the call and said, “Otobong, I am so sorry, my period just started and I am having cramps. I can’t sleep out this night”.fwb14 He immediately started laughing and I knew that he had seen through my lie. He told me that I was joking because he didn’t drive all the way for nothing. He reassured me that nothing that I didn’t want was going to him and just like I did in the dream, I believed him.

I will just go and tell him how much I like him but I can’t have anything with him because he already has a girlfriend and I won’t make him cheat on her.

The end.

Phew! Finally done! I know you expected more, pardon me. This is my first attempt at writing an erotica and I obviously suck. lol…. Thank you for reading. Kindly let me know exactly what you think and don’t forget to subscribe. Happy holidays and have a great week! Mwahhhhh!

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  1. faisal August 5, 2014 at 1:04 pm -  Reply

    This is why I shoot people

    • shughar August 5, 2014 at 2:22 pm -  Reply

      LMAOOOOOOOOOOOO……….Ramadan is over fa! Please, don’t be angry. lol

  2. teleola July 29, 2014 at 1:21 pm -  Reply

    This isn’t much of erotica. You didn’t get your hands dirty at all but it was still good. Kept me in suspense. You will improve.

    • shughar July 30, 2014 at 2:46 pm -  Reply

      Hehehehe…. Thank you jare. This is not my area of interest tho, I was just testing waters.

  3. theshaione July 29, 2014 at 1:08 am -  Reply

    Lwkmd…u took the easy way out on this one. and it was a cheap shot!

    Believe me, it would have been a lot more impactful and meaningful if it weren’t a dream.

    These kind dreams are “husband of the seas” kind…and seeing how d guy is from a particular region where it is common….enuff said.

    To the real deal, I like the way u put this story together…and the way u also presented it. the Sex part could do with actual details of the lovemaking for it to qualify for the title ‘raunchy’…Buh, u try no be small.

    • shughar July 29, 2014 at 8:02 am -  Reply

      Hahahaha! “Husbands of the sea” indeed! I personally like reading stuff that some pieces are left to the imagination. Also, I decided not to be more explicit for some reasons -_- . Thank you jare

  4. Genro July 28, 2014 at 4:01 pm -  Reply

    Nice one keep playing with my BP….after all the detailed explanation….na dream….she must go to that dream land and make it her home…good write up….

    • shughar July 29, 2014 at 8:04 am -  Reply

      Chai! Make it her home ke? You wan kill the girl? Lol. Thank you dear

  5. femi July 28, 2014 at 3:29 pm -  Reply

    Na wa o.. Na wen I don dey enjoy am u come sabi say u go turn am to dream.. Well written…. I actually got lost in thoughts; if I was that guy…..

    • shughar July 28, 2014 at 9:51 pm -  Reply

      lol….sorry. hmmmmmmmmm

  6. DR Nwax July 28, 2014 at 1:54 pm -  Reply

    Hian! Hian! Hian! Mscheeeeeeeeew! Hian! Hian! I dey vex! Dream ke, why would you decide to ‘dream such a dream’? Eh!, ‘beht’ why? Why? (crying) what kind of rough play is this ‘kwannu’?
    Anyways, nice piece and the CONTROVERSIAL(dream) way it ended, I didn’t see that coming! You could be more explicit, albeit dancing on the precipice of extreme explicit erotica. Nice piece. She should just get laid and stop having dreams. Besides, why do we have dreams, is it not to make them into reality?

    • shughar July 28, 2014 at 3:16 pm -  Reply

      This my randy brother! I know you want to be an ‘erotica site’. I bind u! Lol. Thank you dear….. Oya dream your own dream so that it can come true na

  7. Korlahjor July 28, 2014 at 12:22 pm -  Reply

    Make dat dream become reality oooo….haba nw

  8. damstylee July 28, 2014 at 12:06 pm -  Reply

    Dream ke?? What kind of rough play is that?!

    • shughar July 28, 2014 at 1:20 pm -  Reply

      no vex o. lol

  9. Redd July 28, 2014 at 7:24 am -  Reply

    LMAO!!! Good one, very good.

    • shughar July 28, 2014 at 1:15 pm -  Reply

      thank you :)

  10. elsieisy July 28, 2014 at 6:52 am -  Reply

    hahahaha, ok now the disconnect finally made sense, i thought as much. nice one.

    • shughar July 28, 2014 at 12:52 pm -  Reply

      hehehehe. thank you

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